Bizarre boot chaos across two drives (raw disk clone with dd)

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For one thing make sure this line is uncommented:
/etc/default/grub

GRUB_DISABLE_OS_PROBER=false

(and run sudo update-grub again)

For the rest .. you probably need to include some actual information, such as blkid, lsblk, cat /etc/fstab, etc.