That right now is defenetly to much of everything. The placement is also not good, because it seems that the stationX logo belongs to manjaro, while the manjaro logo belongs to stationX Our current Manjaro logo is to “blocky” (or boxy? ) to be used in “In association”-cases, kick that out.
Next you have to see whats the “why should a user buy it”-factor. Is it because of the Hardware OR is it because of the preloaded manjaro? I’d say its because of Manjaro. So So it needs a Manjaro touch. It also needs the StationX branding, because, well its a StationX machine. and I think they require that one?
The last point is that the UEFI-Logo will be used by Windows 10 as boot-logo. (If anyone installes win10 on it). So
So bla bla bla… I’d go with simply this:
or something alike. keep it simple